Joanna Czurlowska 17 I like the use of colour on this page. I like your main cover line because it stands out. The only thing I would change is the background colour because it look like it is too bright. I would also add selling lines to make the cover look more interesting.
I like the title and the fonts used they are very attractive and eye catching.The main picture has been taken well.
ReplyDeleteI don't like the white background again.
I would add more features to the front page and maybe add more yellow as you have a bit of it on his jumper and your star.
I would keep the main picture the same and all the fonts used.
Yasser age 21
I like the masthead and the fonts used they are eye catching, and the key image makes it look professional
ReplyDeleteI dont like the white background because it makes it look dull, I would recommend you adding more coverlines and selling lines.
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I like the font of the masthead but you could have used a better font for the
ReplyDeletemain copy. I also like the position of the key image.
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Joanna Czurlowska 17
ReplyDeleteI like the use of colour on this page. I like your main cover line because it stands out. The only thing I would change is the background colour because it look like it is too bright. I would also add selling lines to make the cover look more interesting.
I really like it, it looks very professional, the lay out, organisation, etc. However, you could change the colour of the Masthead.
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